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*The way men act*

Don’t you dare come near me
My heart shall not be taken,
Every time I give it to you
I see that it is breakin.

You asked me to give you my love
And so I gave you my heart,
But you cared nothing for it
And so you tore me apart.

You begged for another chance
And so I let you try,
But everytime you pushed me around
And everytime I cried.

Now I have to get rid of you
Because you’re treating me like dirt,
And even though we were dating
You acted like a flirt.
:iconemmelinee-tortelinee:

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this is another peom for mezza...... it's about how some men act which makes women decide on other females as well

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:iconhomicidal-mistress:
I actually like it, its not that bad.... :hug: nice work

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:iconthedarkenedlight:
I like it. Though... its sad when the roles are half-reversed, and its the girl begging the guy for another chance.

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I reject your reality and substitute my own.
:iconemmelinee-tortelinee:
well actually i hate it.... it has nothing to do with depression or death so i don't like it much

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iloveyou:heart:

=RawEm0tion
:iconaedammair-feline:
emme its good.....reminds me of past relationships...
but now im so much stronger and i rock on....lol :headbang: :w00t!: :nana:
lol...
:iconsarah-lou:
Exactly how i feel , i think its really good :D
:+fav:
:heart: xox

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there's a salt water film on the jar of your ashes,
i threw them to sea, but a gust blew them backwards,
and the sting in my eyes, that you then inflicted
was par for the course just as when you were living.
:iconemmelinee-tortelinee:
well excuse me!!!!!!!!!!
u make me cry now :( :'(

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iloveyou:heart:

=RawEm0tion
:iconemmelinee-tortelinee:
lol.... thanx.... i just did it from my friends poin of view.... i can't really give much of an opinion coz i'v only had 1 boyfriend and that lasted only about a month and a half :(

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iloveyou:heart:

=RawEm0tion
:iconsarah-lou:
no problem...be thankful you've only had one they are some pretty awful ones out there! xox

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there's a salt water film on the jar of your ashes,
i threw them to sea, but a gust blew them backwards,
and the sting in my eyes, that you then inflicted
was par for the course just as when you were living.

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